reality is superego. This is a problematic statement. I know what you mean, but you need to be more precise. As you mention, Dorothy has control issues, this is more of an id construction than superego. If, however, you're talking about reality playing a controlling or mitigating role on Dorothy then you have made your point.
So Oz plays the role of integrated the three disparate parts of her psyche.
Julian, this is really quite well done. A bit imprecise at the outset, but by the conclusion you are writing with cogency and clarity. Overall, you've written a solid essay here. Your best essay for me to date.
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reality is superego. This is a problematic statement. I know what you mean, but you need to be more precise. As you mention, Dorothy has control issues, this is more of an id construction than superego. If, however, you're talking about reality playing a controlling or mitigating role on Dorothy then you have made your point.
So Oz plays the role of integrated the three disparate parts of her psyche.
Julian, this is really quite well done. A bit imprecise at the outset, but by the conclusion you are writing with cogency and clarity. Overall, you've written a solid essay here. Your best essay for me to date.
T 4+
A 4+
C 3+
K 4
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